Wednesday, 5 September 2018

I Am Poem

      I Am Poem
I am a kitten that loves to follow people.
I wonder if I can climb up a tree.
I  hear footsteps coming.
I see people.
I want to see who that is.
I am a fluffy kitten.
I pretend to fly.
I feel good.
I touch the water.
I worry that I might drown in the water.
I cry at night for my mum and dad.
   I am a penguin.









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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 November 2018 at 11:22

    cool i like your describeing can you tell us what you were doing

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  2. Anonymous19 November 2018 at 11:11

    hi danielle
    im nela i
    like your
    kitin story
    because it has describing
    but i dont get i am a penguin

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