Friday, 13 March 2020
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Kia Ora Danielle,
ReplyDeleteIt is Phoebe here from Karoro School, Greymouth. I enjoyed reading about Ōtaki Beautiful Places. My favourite place that you showed would probably be Ōtaki beach just because it looks so pretty with the blue sky filled with clouds, water and Kapiti Island in the background.
What is your favourite place on your slideshow?
Next time you should go back and read your work and make sure all the sentences make sense. If you want to see my blog it is:http://karorophoebem.blogspot.com/
Ka pai
Phoebe
Hello Phoebe. I think I like the beach too because the sand is always so hot. Thank you for your giving me some feedback. I will go like at your blog.
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