Have you ever seen a house on a island wall? I have and it was terrifying but this is the story. One dark and stormy day I saw this boat on a lake and there was this island that had a house on it. I rowed over.
When I arrived there I tried to find the key to the house. When I turned my head I saw a bridge. So I turned my head back. I could not find the key so I crawled through the window. It felt mysterious. I saw the key on the table with a note. It was covered in dust.
Once I was in I crept to the table, picked up the key, put it in my pocket and read the note. It said, ”I am sorry that I left the house but there was someone breaking everything and I had to row back to shore so I could get away from them. When I found the boat was not there I was terrified so I tried to called the police but there was no internet or wifi. I had nowhere to go so I scurried into the house and stayed there for the rest of the night.
When I woke up I was in the ambulance. “Are you alright”?they said and I said “ I am alright”,. I told them” I have this note in my hand and I will give it to you so you came find the murderer” and they told me they would take care of it for me. I was in the hospital for three days. When I went home it was all quiet. So I popped into bed and had a little snooze. And I didn’t haven’t woken up yet.
THE END
Strong level 3 writing. I love your use of wow words. Keep up the great work Danielle.
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