I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 31 October 2018
Comic strip
Hi blog readers its Danielle here
in my class we are learning to be in the right place at the right time this is my comic strip with tips on how to be at the right place at the right time and tell me if you have any ideas
I am still working on my blog
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Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
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hi im Brazil from kaingaroa i like your tips of being at the right time
ReplyDeleteHey Danielle,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lara from Kaingaroa school.
I like how your class has started making comics there is a website online that your class could use called comicstripnews.
My feedback is maybe next time complete your comic before posting it.
Hi Danielle. My name is Eva and I am from Kaingaroa school.
ReplyDeleteI like your comic but next finish them before you post.