Thursday, 30 July 2020

Healthy rivers

Information report

In our ATN we are writing an information report. An information report is about an object, person or an animal. We use the W words like when, where, why, who or what.
Introduction

In our class we are going to be going to go to a river in Ōtaki to see how healthy it is. We need these rivers for drinking, watering plants, enjoyment and for animals. 80% of our rivers are poor quality because for some dairy farmers, topsoil and it is impacting on our clean green for New Zealand.

Features:

At Waitohu stream there live wild life like fresh water fish and more. The Waitohu stream come down the Tararua hills to the sea. Did you know how long the Waitohu stream is? It is up to 54 square kilometres long, which sounds long to me. In 2006 there was flooding because the mouth moved and it caused do to dune-erosion and it caused flooding to the stream and that’s a hazard.
riverbank-otaki-river - Riverbank Engineering


3 comments:

  1. Hi danielle! I love this writing, Its really good and its made by yourself! The picture of the river is really pretty. What did you search up to find it? Bye! :-)

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  2. Hi Danielle! I really liked your information report introduction. I thought you explained what an information is really well. Maybe you could check out mine?

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. 
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