I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 13 March 2020
Thursday, 5 March 2020
Poem this is just to say
This is Just to Say that I am sorry
by William Carlos Williams & Danielle
I have swang the swing
that hit my sister’s face
and which you were probably not expecting to get stitches for
Forgive me I am so sorry
they were so angry at me for doing it
Friday, 28 February 2020
Swimming Sports
I walked into the pool and saw the colour tentes red, green, yellow, and blue which I am in,everyone was sitting under their colours. The hot stemming sun hit my face. I sat down and felt the spicy grass touch me.
I heard everyone cheering on their colours Go Go Go! I see the big splashes from the swimmers. Sitting there watching people racing up and down. There was not a lot of room to sit down under the blue tente.
When I heard them say we can go home I was so happy but it was so hard to stand up my legs were so sore. I got home and I was happy.
Monday, 23 September 2019
Friday, 13 September 2019
My Poem
The Sea
I was walking to the sea
And in my hand was cup of tea
I saw a lemon tree
But there was a big bee
I heard something aaaaah its a bee
It stung my knee
I finished my tea
Then ran to the sea
By Danielle
Monday, 24 June 2019
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