I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 31 October 2018
Comic strip
Hi blog readers its Danielle here
in my class we are learning to be in the right place at the right time this is my comic strip with tips on how to be at the right place at the right time and tell me if you have any ideas
I am still working on my blog
Friday, 26 October 2018
Friday, 7 September 2018
My Math Don't Subtract Add
We have been practising the maths strategy reversibility. This is my maths that I did today. It was quite fun to do. I love maths.
Wednesday, 5 September 2018
I Am Poem
I Am Poem
I am a kitten that loves to follow people.
I wonder if I can climb up a tree.
I hear footsteps coming.
I see people.
I want to see who that is.
I am a fluffy kitten.
I pretend to fly.
I feel good.
I touch the water.
I worry that I might drown in the water.
I cry at night for my mum and dad.
I am a penguin.
Friday, 31 August 2018
My Maths
Assertation:
I think different wings will make it go faster or slower
Planes...
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Variable… Measure
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Flight distance
#1
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Flight distance
#2
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Flight distance
#3
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Average
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Photo 1
1
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Wing shape
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8.50m
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9.20m
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6.74m
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24.44m
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Photo 2
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Wing shape
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7.43m
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9m
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12.54m
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28.97m
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Photo 3
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Wing shape
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9.44m
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9.80m
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9m
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28.24m
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My conclusion
I found out that the plane with the wings that I left normal went the farthest.
Friday, 22 June 2018
Murder Writing
Murder Investigation
Have you ever seen a house on a island wall? I have and it was terrifying but this is the story. One dark and stormy day I saw this boat on a lake and there was this island that had a house on it. I rowed over.
When I arrived there I tried to find the key to the house. When I turned my head I saw a bridge. So I turned my head back. I could not find the key so I crawled through the window. It felt mysterious. I saw the key on the table with a note. It was covered in dust.
Once I was in I crept to the table, picked up the key, put it in my pocket and read the note. It said, ”I am sorry that I left the house but there was someone breaking everything and I had to row back to shore so I could get away from them. When I found the boat was not there I was terrified so I tried to called the police but there was no internet or wifi. I had nowhere to go so I scurried into the house and stayed there for the rest of the night.
When I woke up I was in the ambulance. “Are you alright”?they said and I said “ I am alright”,. I told them” I have this note in my hand and I will give it to you so you came find the murderer” and they told me they would take care of it for me. I was in the hospital for three days. When I went home it was all quiet. So I popped into bed and had a little snooze. And I didn’t haven’t woken up yet.
THE END
Strong level 3 writing. I love your use of wow words. Keep up the great work Danielle.
Have you ever seen a house on a island wall? I have and it was terrifying but this is the story. One dark and stormy day I saw this boat on a lake and there was this island that had a house on it. I rowed over.
When I arrived there I tried to find the key to the house. When I turned my head I saw a bridge. So I turned my head back. I could not find the key so I crawled through the window. It felt mysterious. I saw the key on the table with a note. It was covered in dust.
Once I was in I crept to the table, picked up the key, put it in my pocket and read the note. It said, ”I am sorry that I left the house but there was someone breaking everything and I had to row back to shore so I could get away from them. When I found the boat was not there I was terrified so I tried to called the police but there was no internet or wifi. I had nowhere to go so I scurried into the house and stayed there for the rest of the night.
When I woke up I was in the ambulance. “Are you alright”?they said and I said “ I am alright”,. I told them” I have this note in my hand and I will give it to you so you came find the murderer” and they told me they would take care of it for me. I was in the hospital for three days. When I went home it was all quiet. So I popped into bed and had a little snooze. And I didn’t haven’t woken up yet.
THE END
Strong level 3 writing. I love your use of wow words. Keep up the great work Danielle.
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